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[Carmen de la Pica Morales]

Carmen cursed herself quietly as she felt Shane's hand go limp in her own. That wasn't what she'd planned. She let her hand go slowly and got to her feet. "I'll be right back hun, you keep fighting" she said, turning and leaving a room for the doctor. She thought it best to tell someone she'd woke up, though she also wanted to leave because she hated seeing her this way.

[Shane McCutcheon]

Shane's head tilted to one side. The monitors went alarmed. Her heart rate was speading up, as her body was fighting. The nurses came rushing into the room and pushed Carmen aside.

[Carmen de la Pica Morales]

Carmen's back hit the door as the nurse went passed. She gripped the handle and stared over at Shane's back. Her stomach drops and she had to remember to breath as it was refusing to come naturally."No baby" she whispered, shaking her head slightly.

((have to go,sorry. But I'll be able to stay on this time tomorrow))

[Shane McCutcheon]

The monitors kept going and the nurses continued to check her vitals. The turned to Carmen. "Miss you will have to leave..." The nurse said as she looked over at her.

[Carmen de la Pica Morales]

Carmen shook her head and stood where she was in the door way, still watching Shane. But then she felt hands grip her upper arms softly and tug her gently from the room. Before she'd even realised what had happened she was stood face to face with a very tired and anxious looking Thorn. "We're only in the way if we stay" Thorn explained though Carmen continued to look puzzled. "How did you know she was here?" she asked, glancing back into the room every few seconds. "I was in the club, I saw her leaving and she seemed pretty out of it. I know what she can get like if she's taken anything so I followed her home to make sure she didn't get herself into anything. I've been out here a pretty long time, I thought it best to leave you alone" by now she'd walked Carmen down the hallway a little so she could no longer look through the door, she knew it wouldn't help to see Shane going through this.

Only now, away from Shane, did Carmen seem to realize the state Thorn was in. The white button down shirt she was wearing was ripped and covered in blood and a fresh cut ran across one cheek as well as a few on her arms. “What happened to you?” Carmen asked, though Thorn wasn’t sure if the concern she heard was for her or left over from Shane. “Oh it’s nothing” she said “It’s fake, I had a gig with my friend before I went to the club, he’s pretty weird, we’re always dressed up one way or another when on stage” she explained, hoping to distract Carmen if only until the worst was over. It didn’t seem to help, she could tell Carmen was only half listening.

[Shane McCutcheon]

(Your going to hate me lol im gonna put Shane into a coma and im gonna play with my new character for awhile =P maybe something could happen with her and Carmen? make her abit confused?)

Shanes vitals dropped back into their coma state and the nurses left the room. The doctor which had talked to Carmen before stopped her in the corridor and softly grabbed her arm. "Miss Morales...Shane's vitals dropped again..She slipped back under.." The nurse said taking deep breaths inbetween the words.

[Carmen de la Pica Morales]

((Actually I think it's a good idea. I thought it would be weird if Shane just woke straight up and got better, there wouldn't be much point to it. So her staying in a coma and Carmen finding herself intrested in someone else it would add a lot more drama. You're using Kim too right? (yay Kim) I could see her as reminding Carmen of Shane a lot if you actually have the character like Kim is in real life. Plus I want Carmen to make friends with Thorn. Okay rant over))

Thorn knew this wasn't good, both what had happened to Shane and the look on Carmen's face. Thorn grabbed her arms again as she tried to run off down the corridor to Shane's room. "Thorn get the fuck off me!" she screamed but Thorn just spun her round and looked at her. She'd begun to cry now and Thorn found her own eyes watering a little as they both seemed to realise that this wasn't something Shane was going to pull herself out of overnight. The tears seemed to take over fully and Carmen let herself rest against Thorn, crying into her shoulder. Thorn nodded to the nurse a little as she watched Carmen before looking up. "Thanks for all you've done. I think I should take her home, this isn't helping her" she said quietly.

((So how do we bring her in, random person on the street, someone one of them knows?))

[Shane McCutcheon]

((lol cool! and yeah her character was going to be like her in real life...I was thinking that maybe they meet in the gym maybe?))

[Carmen de la Pica Morales]

((Sure if you can start that is ^^))

[Blair Jackson]

((Sure can ^^))